Monday, June 11, 2012


IT IS BETTER IF WE SMOKE



Nowadays, there are smokers everywhere. It is close to the fact that there are lot of people die because of lungs cancer. That is why some issues about cigarettes should be banned rise. If the issues come true, there will be bad impacts for smokers such as less spirit in doing something or feel boring all the time. This essay aims to persuade the readers that cigarette is not bad at all. Do you think cigarette is really bad? In Indonesia, about 75% of people are identified as smokers (Muhamad Alif: Smoke and its danger. Jakartapost.com). They smoke cigarette consciously and know what the bad effects of smoking but that is not matter for them. They still smoke cigarettes. Besides, cigarette has an important role in this country especially for the economic growth. So, the reasons why cigarettes should be kept legal are there will be black market of cigarettes, a lot of people will lose their job, the country revenue will come down, and cigarette industries can support many events in Indonesia.
There will be a high demand for selling cigarettes on the black market if the government makes the cigarettes become illegal. Person who is mentioned as a smoker will be hard to stop consuming cigarettes suddenly. They will do whatever they can do to get cigarette. Then, businessmen will see the problem and provide a chance for the smokers to get the cigarettes on the black market. Every good which is sold in black market is assumed free from taxes because the black market goes illegally. Of course it is bad for the country. Next, the price of the good may be higher than it used to be because it is rare. It means the price will be more expensive because cigarette is needed by lot of people but it is illegal so that the businessmen will take the big profit by increasing the price. Another bad effect of the black market is the quality of the good. People do not know whether the cigarettes sold in the black market have a good quality or not. So it will be dangerous for the people.
People who work on the cigarette industries will lose their job if cigarette is illegal. In Indonesia, the cigarette industries are concerned as the biggest industry that has thousands of employees. If the companies are closed, those men power will lose their job. It is hard to find a good job nowadays. If the people do not have any title or good education history, the people may not get the job for the rest of the days. Therefore the unemployment rates of the country will rise up and become a big problem for the country. Because the unemployment rates rise up, the number of poverty will also increase so that many children in the country will lose their chance to get a good education because their father do not have a job anymore.
Cigarette industries help the government increase the country revenue. As mentioned before, the cigarette companies are the biggest industries which have higher tax than other industries. Related to this country, Indonesia is a developing country. So it needs some companies which can help increasing the country revenue. So, if the Indonesian governments make cigarettes become illegal, this country will lose a big chance to get the big revenue because the companies will be closed.
The last reason why cigarette should keep legal is the cigarette industries support many big events in this country. Some of them are soundrenaline, A-mild Live on TV, and Java Jazz concert. Those events are supported by PT. SAMPOERNA (T. Widianti: 2008). Besides, there are some TV programs supported by the cigarette industries in Indonesia. For example, the program Barclays Premier League and Indonesia Super League on Global tv and MNC tv are supported by Djarum Super and Gudang Garam: Pria punya selera.  The market price of those programs is too expensive so that the other companies cannot support the programs. But PT. Djarum Super and PT. Gudang Garam: Pria punya selera can support them so that Indonesian can watch the programs.
So there will be black market of cigarettes if the cigarette industries are banned and closed. People who work on the companies will lose their job and the country revenue will come down. Besides, the cigarette companies support many events in Indonesia so that cigarettes should be kept legal. The industry brings a big revenue for the country. A man has his own right to do something. If the thing is not really bad, why the thing should be banned? The people smoke cigarettes consciously means that they are fine with it. There is not any thing wrong happened to themselves when they smoke. So, just let the cigarette keep legal and let the people choose whether they use it or not. It is better if we smoke to help our government develops this country.

References
http://jakartapost.com
http://www.writework.com/essay/against-smoking-persuasive-essay-and-describes-many-reason#comments
http://www.123helpme.com/view.asp?id=10848
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